Special thanks to and who took the time to give some constructive comments on the previous version. (Which is [here], if you're interested). I feel a lot better about the way his hut looks, now. I'm hoping that I got the right balance between objects to define the hut and keeping the focus on Eechi, where it should be.
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Original Story:
He'd waited long for the day when he was allowed to use a set of the Holy Instruments. Of course, they were only the Maracas: only the least of the Magical Musical Implements. But now that the elders had allowed him to use the Maracas, Eechi knew that he could work up to the Higher Totems by his diligence.
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P.S. I still love his mask.
I really like this! The color scheme is great- I love the way you took two really bright colors (the red and the yellow) and kept their energy while darkening them. Very nice!
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