So, after

gave me some constructive criticism on my original version of umbrella-bird
[link] , I decided to do a little lightening up of the umbrella and some getting rid of dark lines and all. I was going to just upload this version as an edit, but it seems that there are some people who like that version, so this is a version two (kind of like what I did with the Liliana Repaints)
You get to decide which you prefer!
love the colors and the hatching effect on the clouds
No need to change this one just for that minor detail, I don't think it takes away from the piece enough to bother with it. Great improvement, really good work. Keep it up!
I agree, I think this is better than the original one!!